The Dark Part

I like how you've increased the suspense and mystery with the ellipses at the end. I feel as if you've left it quite open to interpretation as a result of that, in a sense... I don't know. I both like it and dislike it because it's cut off. =/

The first part sets the scene effectively, though, and I really like the potent effect from "perverted", which could suggest many things, essentially.

Not bad.